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[Klaus v M.]

I have sent an angel a long time ago,
The most beautiful angel in all the sky,
Asking him to be sweet as a butterfly
To take care of you my lovely swallow.

But after some times he came back to me,
Smilling like a kind flying like a bee.
His voice sang;
He's an angel, there is just one thing he can't do,
Protect an other angel, an angel like you.

K. v M.

[vincent 00]

[quote name='Klaus v M.' date='Feb 21 2009, 12:34 AM' post='141872']
I have sent an angel a long time ago,
The most beautiful angel in all the sky,
Asking him to be sweet as a butterfly
To take care of you my lovely swallow.

But after some times he came back to me,
Smilling like a kind flying like a bee.
His voice sang;
He's an angel, there is just one thing he can't do,
Protect an other angel, an angel like you.

K. v M.


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Rééllement merveilleux ..
Il y a des mots beaux à couper le souffle ..
Ta lovely swallow serait-il ma gorgée de beauté ..?

Vincent

[The Child]

joli texte un peu court dommage

[Paname]

Ta lovely swallow serait-il ma gorgée de beauté ..?

ça serait un peu dur à avaler

[Klaus v M.]

lorsque je l'ai écrit j'ai voulu faire un jeu de mots avec swallow=gorgée
mais "my lovely swallow" cela veut aussi dire ma belle hirondelle.
Je suis content que le poeme vous ai plu

[hirondelle]

"my lovely swallow" cela veut aussi dire ma belle hirondelle.

Yes! I like it!

[Aksel]

un joli poème, en effet.
Mais " hirondelle", en aglais, c'est "sparrow"
to swallow signifie avaler, si je ne m'abuse ^^