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[Azzura]

Someone has taken over me

A dark passenger crawling inside me

A frozen angel standing in the cold

In her long snow colored coat

Her presence was bliss,

Her eyes were danger,

She once stared at me

For infinite seconds

Then time stopped

And the world collapsed in silence

So nothing remained,

But suspended breaths

No, nothing remained,

A dagger in my chest

Then I looked at sunshine

And my eyes turned to gas

And my soul vanished like smoke

[Fitiavana]

So I do have also such feeling ... sometimes, when life is sensless . Then i wish to be that angel you are struggling with in order to give to each of us, even just a little more happiness.  Come back to reality and life and think that in spite of all we may HOPE ! Regards.  Fitiavana

[Cyraknow]

A beautiful poem, pregnant with meaning ans sensibility.

[FlorentM]

Thank you Azura for sharing this beautifully touching poem with us. I especially like "And the world collapsed in silence.", both for its particularly strong imeaning and the sonorities at its end: "silence" seems to resonate like in an empty world.

[Azzura]

Thank you Azura for sharing this beautifully touching poem with us. I especially like "And the world collapsed in silence.", both for its particularly strong imeaning and the sonorities at its end: "silence" seems to resonate like in an empty world.

 

You're welcome FlorentM. Life is paved with a very few unbelievable moments that deserve being captured. Did my best to capture this one!